2010-05-04

Project Four - Collage

This is a project I will return to during the course. The idea of the project was to create a collage of photographs in a panoramic format. The first stage was to produce an image using a small number of photos.  This is an example of my work:

View from Cliveden towards Cookham














The next stage was to produce a larger panorama of from at least 12 images. This is my first attempt.

Hambleden Village Oxfordshire









The two photographs are a creditable first effort but they are not great images. I found visualising the composition to be very difficult. Whilst the normal rules of good composition apply, the wider perspective makes pre-visualisation problematic. Neither photograph has a strong composition.

In the first image, I was attracted by the range of textures and variations on the single colour  - green. In the final result I feel that the composition lacks a point of focus. Also chopping off the top of the trees close to their tops doesn't seem to work.

In the second larger  panorama of Hambleden I was disappointed that I did not accurately estimate the depth of focus so parts of the village are not sharply in focus. But the bigger issue is the composition. The image is unbalanced with horizon on the right much higher than on the left. Also the horizon is set too low, with too much sky. The key point of interest is the village not the sky! I think I should have moved closer into the village bringing the cows closer to provide foreground interest and reducing the amount of sky in the frame. Again I need to create a clear point of interest - perhaps the church tower.

My key learning point is to carefully pre-visualise the composition before shooting and hoping for the best. I will try to use  a panoramic viewing card to assist with this. Also when using a telephoto lens, I must be careful with the focus depth of field.
Posted by Keith Greenough LRPS at 5/04/2010 08:44:00 pm
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About Me

I have been taking photographs since I was young boy some 45 years ago, but only seriously since 2005 when I enrolled to study at the Open College of the Arts. I am working towards a BA in Photography. I am a Licentiate of the Royal Photographic Society. This log record details of my projects and assignments during my studies. It also records ideas, work by other artists/photographers, notes on books/websites/exhibitions, influences, discoveries, thoughts, research findings and observations as I work through my courses. You can contact me at keith.greenough@btinternet.com or simply leave a comment on one of my posts.

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  • TPOTY Awards (2010), TRAVEL PHOTOGRAPHER OF THE YEAR Journey Three, Travel Photographer of the Year Suffolk UK

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